英语四级出彩的作文句子
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21. A and B share certain characteristics of form while differ in their ways of looking at the inner reality and developing a plot.
虽然A和B在形式上有某些共同之处,但是在审视内心世界和展开情节方面却各不相同。
妙笔赏析:两种事物的异同点对比,通过while(然而)连接,形成结构对比;然后通过share和differ一对反义词的运用形成语义对比。
22. Most, if not all, essays are made up of the beginning, the body and the end.
即使不是所有的,至少大多数文章是由开头、正文和结尾组成。
妙笔赏析:if not all经常跟在most, some, part等词后作插入语,起到减缓行文节奏和丰富表达方式的作用。
23. The beginning rouses the reader's interest in and secures his attention to the subject matter of the essay.
这个开头引起了读者对文章主题的兴趣,并保证了读者关注这一主题。
妙笔赏析:本句两短语rouses the reader's interest in和secures his attention to共用一宾语the subject matter of the essay,难度远远大于两个动词共享一宾语,运用巧妙,行文简洁。
24. Proportion is as important to an essay as it is to a painting.
比例之于文章如同它之于绘画一样重要。
妙笔赏析:本句结构为 Sth is as + adj. to A as it is to B (某物之于A如同它之于B一样......); 本结构类似于 A is to B what / as C is to D (A之于B如同C之于D); 前后结构对称,如同一句古诗。此结构的恰当运用有助于增添文采。
25. Foreign trade is beneficial to and indispensable for all nations.
对外贸易不仅有利于各个,而且是必不可少的。
妙笔赏析:本句两短语is beneficial to和is indispensable for共用一宾语all nations;运用巧妙,行文简洁。
26. They present their ideas in an impressive and convincing manner.
他们用给人以深刻印象和令人信服的方式展示自己的观点。
妙笔赏析:作者用present、impressive和convincing等正式词汇表现出主语“they”真诚态度。
27. Under one of the trees stood her parents who, while keeping an eye on her, were examining the milk-white blossoms with great interest and admiration.
她的父母站在一棵树下,一边照看着她,一边饶有兴致和满怀赞赏地察看那些白色的花朵儿。
妙笔赏析:本句为完全倒装句。主语为her parents,谓语为stood。因为主语后有一who引导的定语从句(一直到句尾),为了避免头重脚轻,固使用倒装句,同时也起到强调地点状语under one of the trees的作用。
28. Repetitions, for instance, lay emphasis on an idea.
比如说,重复强调了一种观点。
妙笔赏析:lay emphasis / stress on“强调”,经典短语,值得学习模仿。
29. Instead of beginning a sentence with a noun or a pronoun as subject, one may well start out with an adverb or an adverb clause.
一个句子可以一个副词或副词性从句开头,而不是以一个名词或代词作主语。
妙笔赏析:本句以一个副词短语开头,“不走寻常路”;其次,本句用两个同义词短语beginn... with和start out with表达相同语义,避免了用词重复,单调。
30. He had no strength to walk, let alone run.
他没有力气走路,更不用说跑了。
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